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                         Shift of lighting part 2
The day was sunny not a cloud in the sky and it felt nice to beside another pony he had a white out fit with a very peculiar look to it he was basically my color if black was his secondary color but it’s his main o well. We stop almost immediately and he looks at me with a smile “well lighting rose where here.” I look beyond him and see pony Ville with its people walking around and doing there every day activities it looked peaceful and I like it that way. “Well let’s go then.” He started walking but I snap to attention and grab his arm to pull his arm back. “Were going in?” I ask him “yea we are why are you looking at me like that we have to find the “mane six” don’t we.” He says. I just watch as he goes in but I sit and don’t move but I feel magic and I get thrown in. “god she is being such a sour” I said to myself. “Can we just find the main 6 please and thank you without you doing what you did back there.” But she just looked with anger at me “what do you mean!?” before I could answer a purple pony with a long mane just looks at us and with a huge smile. “O my sweet celestia alicorns o my god ALICORN’S!” she ran over to us and immediately started asking questions until lighting pushed her down to the ground and said “slow down.” The purple pony then took a breath and just calmed down “sorry seeing other alicorns besides the princesses ahem my name is twilight sparkle I’m the student of princess celestia and I run the library here.” I looked at time shift and he just immediately ran over to her and said “were is the library.” And she took us to her home. When we got to her home I noticed that the other ponies looked at me with either with scared or face’s that show I’m not that wanted. All of a sudden I get bumped by a blue pony when I got back up and was about to let them have it but I shut up to see the guy I had a crush on I then rub my eyes and its really him he then asks “o my god are you ok?” I then blush and wave my head down and whisper my name “I’m sorry what is that?” I then say my name “lighting rose.” He then smiles at me and says so your that pony everyone is talking about sweet.” I then blush crazily and he just keeps smiling “maybe we can talk later?” I then nod crazily and he walks off looking back at me blushing himself I then smile and litterly skip my way in but what shocked me to see that shift is already reading 5 books at a time and twilight looking at her with a big smile and asking him questions and him asking back it really felt funny to me but then I look at shift and I could see little hearts over his head and I think doesn’t he have a love or something. I drag him away and he drops his books everywhere and I drag him into a corner and lose it on him “hey don’t you have a girl friend already!?” he then looks down “well I used to but she... died it was a battle a long time ago and well she got stabbed and bled out.” I then let him go and said “ok you can go hit on twilight.” He then smiled and walked back over and started talking to her again. She looks just so amazing and she’s smart too she’s everything I look for in a girl and she is just amazing “ummm hey time shift.” I look over and she is blushing herself and it shows me she likes me too and she fires the question “would you mind spending the night you could meet the mane 6 and you and me could talk more.” I then snapped to attention “the mane 6 you know them?” “Yea I’m the leader.” I then drop my jaw to the bottom of the floor and then close it “I’m sitting in front of the girls I’m looking for yes.” She then smiles and walks over to me and grabs my hand and we go get them. Well we finally go get to meet the other 5 and meeting the leader to them is just impressive luck. But I walk up to shift and ask him something “hey shift I met the guy I have a crush on and well... he asked if we could meet again.” He just looks at me with a simple smile and just nods and I run off. Twilight looks at me and asks “are you too brother and sister.” I look and laugh “no were just new friends.” I just watch as she runs off.  As I run all over town I find him in the park sitting by a tree and looking around but he finally sees me and smiles and I walk over to him and sit beside him and we just sit quietly for a few before I ask a question “so why are you the first pony to take interest in me why not run or hate me like the others?” he just smiled “well I don’t see why I mean yea you are a alicorn and everyone fears that you’ll turn into another night mare moon and wreck everything but I don’t see that in you ill I see is a regular pony and well like everything else just a person who wants friends and well that’s enough for me.” I look at him with shock a pony that doesn’t hate other’s for what others say now I really like him I then start to stutter “umm well... I... umm I kind of.” “Like me.” I then look at him with shock “how did you know.” “Well it would help to know that I kind of watched you sometimes and crushed on you from a far.” I looked at him with a jaw on the ground and was shocked to hear him the guy I watched from a far do the same thing that I did. I then put our faces together and we start to kiss and he doesn’t take too long to kiss back it felt real to me and everything I fantasised about for years and I think he’s enjoying it too but he breaks the kiss and I whimper a little but I noticed he whimpered a lot more than I did I then say “want more girly.” He just looks at me with shock but he then nods and we kiss again. It had been 20min of straight kissing but it had gotten dark and he noticed it “well I think I should get going rose.” I then agree but we both hear a rustling in the bushes but we don’t get 5 seconds until 3 changelings jump out and surround us. “Changeling’s this is the 4th time this month.” I look at him with confusion and I could tell he was scared too “what do we do.” I ask him “I don’t know what to do this is the first time they came to me.” Well it wasn’t my first time but it’s my first time with someone else “look what we have here guys a couple they shall make a nice snack” the three just circle like sharks until one decides to jump but this time I’m ready I kick him in mid air and he falls down and hits the ground hard the other 2 jumped us but we hit them back but they got up and charged us I got grabbed by two of them and light gets grabbed by the other but I manage to shake one off and smash the other in the face breaking a tooth and knocking him out. But light is inches away from a kiss but I hit the changeling in the face and he falls over and light sighs “thanks for the save rose.” “No problem.” We just stare at the two I knocked out but I didn’t notice is the one behind us get up and hits light over the head and grabs me and kisses me but I hit him in the chest but he had enough time to put a bit of his spell on me but I can still stand. But I can’t draw my knife and he grabs me again but this time a blade comes at his mouth and it stops him before he can kiss me. “If you think I’m going to stand here and watch you take over my friend I’m going to say no to that you have one chance go away before I slice your head off.” “Shift...” the changeling then ran and disappeared into the night and everything calmed down shift helped light up and he used magic to get me out of the daze I was in and shift then brought us both back to the library. We got inside and the entire mane six was there but shift then sat down and told us both something we will never forget “chrysalis is coming we have to leave right away tomorrow and light can come if he wants too but we need to find the element’s before she gets here.”
The curtains are raised and a love life has started between shift and twilight and another with blue light and lighting rose but now they are in trouble chrysalis is back and now the elements are the only thing that can stop her sit tight for part 3.
part two is here folks enjoy and also a romance to add to it yes me first romance part like again katy the dog's page here [link] shes a great partner and im glad we are doing this
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Artist
OMG! THIS IS SOOO AWESOME!!!
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
i know what do u like about it
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Artist
when i kicked the changleings asses XD
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
that was your fave part i thought making out with your bf was a good part its actually my first time making a story like that
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Artist
well you did a good job and also he's not my bf... he's my bffbf
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
o ok then well what next?
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Artist
how bout we meet dicord on our way to crysilas
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
i was going to after the chrysalis incident first 10 us against changelings 5 parts of us and discord and 5 more for another new villain but hey discord along the way isn't a bad idea so sure we can do that
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
so what dose everyone think
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