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Shift of time
Part 3
We left pony Ville after shift told us about chrysalis and the changelings luckily we have the mane 6 and blue lighting and I don’t have much to complain about. All I could see was trees and every pony and that’s it and we traveled for a day and I think were lost. “Hey shifts are we lost.” Rainbow asked “rainbow!” rarity shouted “what I’m speaking the truth where lost he has no idea where’s he’s going.” “Still a lady should be patient with a man even if we are lost.” Time shift then looks at the other’s with a disappointed face “thanks but I think we should make camp here tonight.” Everyone agreed and we pitched the tents but we split between guys and girls much to my discomfort I wanted to be with lighting but hey I guess it would work that way o well. I started the fire after finding wood and we sat around and had something to eat and we just sat around doing nothing and I struck a conversation “so what did you two do before I saved your asses from one Guy.” All that lighting rose did was look at me with a burring rage and responded with “mind your own business shift why do you care?” I look with a irritation and just shove it off “never mind if you’re goanna be like that I’m going to bed any one wake me up there dead unless it’s important got it?” everyone looked at me and just nodded but lighting just looked scared at me and I went to the tent and passed right out. “What is with that guy?” flutter shy asked pinkie just shot up and said “all he needs is a little smile.” Twilight looked at her with a face that thought it was ridiculous and just ignored it “well he doesn’t like fighting the changelings from what I heard he in facts hates them a lot and would like to see the race just die off but he is a calm guy and a bit of a funny guy.” everyone looked at twilight with grins and smiles and just laughed at her but she then got mad and stormed into the other tent. “Well it is getting late we should all hit the hay.” Apple jack said as she headed into the tent and me and the other’s followed but I asked if lighting can come in and every one let him in do to him being scared of shift but he will have to sleep in the same tent as him tomorrow. As I slept I just flew in space all I could see was a rainbow of colors until it faded and I fell to the ground but all I could see was just rocks and pillars but then a flame started and the area burned with flames every were and I heard screams and laughing then ponies ran past me but they seem familiar to me then I recognise my sister and dad they ran right past me I then realised I was at my home. It smelled of smoke but I wasn’t gagging on it but all I could see was my mom giving me a pack and told me to run with every one looking at me when I ran then a break in the door two ponies walked in but I could not make them out but one had blue hair and the other had orange but it could be red it’s hard to make it out with the flames. The one pony with blue charges my family with the other one trying to grab him and pull him back but the blue on knocks off the other and I then find myself in a different spot. I then see shift and the mane 6 but shift is up and the others are down on the ground knocked out and shift has a scythe not a sword but he looks like he is standing up to the blue mane pony and they charge at one another and a clash sends me back into a white space. What did I just see a vision but then I get lunged to a different location. I see discord and the mane 6 beside him under trances but shift and me are standing in the way of them while lighting is getting back up and still shift has his scythe and not a blade were did his blade go? I then see him charge the group and it ends there everything goes black I then wake up. And everyone in the tent is up too with cold sweats. “Did yall just have the same dream?” aj asked twilight then looked and could tell yes we did question is why. As we all get out of the tent we see shift fly back and hit a tree and we all immediately look to see a horror. Discord is back and he’s laughing at shift and we see his blade broken on the ground. As we all run out of the tent to see if shift is ok but we get stopped half way and discord grabs the mane 6 much to our horror and teleports away with them. As we watch them disappear I then shed a tear and run over to shift. “Time shift are you ok?!” he just get’s up and looks at me with anger “DAMIT I FAILED DAMIT DAMIT DAMIT!” he constantly hits the ground and I help him back up. As we look up blue grabs his shattered blade and gives it to shift. “So what now they have the others do we head back?” I ask shift “no we are going to find them and save them I’m not going to quit while we just begin we are going after them.” He says it like he is a hero or something but he has been at it longer then I have so I agree with him and so dose blue but before we head out with our new objective blue asks how are him and shift going to fight shift then looks at him with a grin. After 2min of watching shift draw a circle in the ground and putting his broken blade with sticks in there and makes another but with a metal piece in there with his butt of the sword there as well he then tells us to step back and claps his hands and a flash of light shines and the next thing we see is a scythe and a new blade. “How in the world did you do that?” we ask he then smiles and says “I used alchemy a old form of magic to make them.” He then gives the blade to blue and we go on from there. We run for almost 3 miles until shift tells us to get down. We see a huge force of changelings and who else discord and the mane 6 but they look different they are looking like they were in a daze and they are walking with the horde of changelings. “What are they doing?” lighting asks “they aren’t doing anything they are just mindless dolls now under the control of discord we have to break them out of it.” I then stand up and say “let’s go.” But shift grabs me and pulls me down. “What are you doing are you just asking to get killed?!”  I then puppy eye him and say “sorry.” He sighs and continues “they are heading towards a forest a perfect spot for a ambush we can get them there come on.” We then run to the forest and make it there before the horde dose. We had enough time to set up a thanks to shift’s ability to stop time and we set a perfect trap for those idiots. He then starts time back up but before they get here blue points something out. Hey why didn’t do that when discord kidnapped the mane 6.” He then states that discord cut off his power’s and that’s how he got the edge on him but then he sends me and blue to a different spot and he just stands up and waits for the group to come to him. After about 5 minutes of waiting the group stops in front of shift discord then steps to the front of the group with the mane 6 under toe. “So you’re back for a beating time shift how are you not discouraged from out last battle.” Shift said nothing “no words fine kill him.” The changelings just charged shift but he smiles and the trap is set and the changelings get flung back outside to god knows where and shift just laughs. “Ha ha ha man they flew.” But discord was furious and the mane 6 charged him but unlike last time shift was ready. As they came at him rainbow pulled out a blade and tried to strike him down but shift dogged her and hit her with the butt of the scythe and flung her down to the ground but pinkie and aj jumped him with a knife and axe but he smirked and back flipped behind them. But then flutter shy grabbed him and held tight then I had enough I jump out and charge them with blue behind me and we hit flutter shy in the side of the face and she lets go of shift he then grabs her and throws her at rarity who was about to stab him. But twilight shoots us with magic but shift spins his scythe and blocks the shots but rainbow and pinkie attack from behind but we stop them with knife and sword but aj and rarity tackles us and we get pined while shift still is spinning his scythe but stops and jumps over them but gets hit by rainbow and hits a tree and blocks her blade but barely enough time to get back up but the other 3 charge him while aj and rarity hold us down. Discord then walks over laughing at us and walks over to blue “so what do you think of this?” his eyes then start glowing in different colors and at that same time blue gets the same thing in his. While I watch as the colt I like turns grey a roll my head back to see shift on his back with the 4 ponies on top of him but he knocks them off and gets back up. But before I can try the same thing discord is right on top of me and smiles. “you are profficiesed to stop all evil so how about I change that.” He starts his rings up and I feel there submissive power’s hitting me and they feel wonderful they promise so much and I love them I can’t look away all I see is blue, black, white and  yellow repeating its self over and over and each time I feel nicer but I then remember I cant give in I start to shake them off but aj kisses me and I give in to the rings with the flood gate of hatred and rage open up but it doesn’t matter I love this felling of being controlled but being kissed by a girl makes me sick. As I look as the two fall under discords power I then know I failed I then knock the four away and I decide to retreat while my mind wasn’t under discords control. I then fly up and run. Back with discord. “Should we give chase master?”  The controlled ponies asked in harmony “no he isn’t worth our time lets go get the second element of harmony then will get him ha ha ha ha ha ha.”
Now the tables have turned the 8 are now under discords control and even worse shift has run off to god knows where and what did lighting rose dream about the blue mane pony and shift fighting was it a future flash find out in part 4 (holy crap this is a long one hope you enjoy everyone including you katy.)
part 3 holy crap i worked for hours here a link to katy [link]
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Artist
well this is amazing... but i s=kinda sound like i don't have any powers...
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
you do i just don't know what they are and sorry bout the lesbian kiss i needed you to fall and light was still being pinned to the ground
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Artist
oh well... yea that kiss kinda bothered me but don't worry about it
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
sorry wont happen again
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Artist
ok
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
so what is your ocas power
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Artist
well she helps people team up and help stop bad people (unless their like ralph from "wreck it ralph") and her friends (even just the thought of them in her head) makes her more powerful then celestria, luna, and all the pwerful people combined
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
so she gains power from helping people?
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