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                                  Shift of lighting
(Welcome to shift of lightning a story between my pony time shift and a friends katythedog's pony lighting rose hope you all enjoy and yes I'm still working on part 7 of fall of equstria and part three of thousand son)
It had been ten years since the tribe took my home. It has been a long time I can't remember who or what attacked my home but it was untimely. They took swords and magic to are defenceless home and burned it to the ground with nothing left. I escaped the slaughter of laughing and psychotic ponies and made my way to equstria. I flew for days upon weeks until I found this new place and was ever so happy to walk for a time. I felt the grass on my hooves and it felt nice better then the sand and tree's my village was but still I felt sadden by the loss of my family I don't know whether or not they made it out of our home or not all I remember was a scream and that's it. But that's the time for a different story my life is now inside a cave since no pony like's me all I do is try to talk to them and the scream and flee in terror of my appearance and I was never loved or had a friend since my arrival to this place and now I can't even know what the people of this place do for a living but the town called ponyville and I live in the ever free forest but that's all I know of this land nothing more nothing less. I sob to myself "why am I alone in this cruel world why?" I keep repeating to myself why but I get no answer of course I don't I'm alone aren't I maybe if I go for a walk ill calm down and think more. As I walk down the path all i see is animals and trees no other ponies but i hear laughter just over a hill and i get curious. As i cross over the hill i see 3 ponies and one of them i have been having a crush on he was blue and had a brown mane but that's all i saw i never really got a good look at his eye's but he was handsome and i liked him but he never noticed me i stayed until they left and i decided to head back to my own cave cause it was getting dark. After ten minutes of walking i finally found out I'm lost it's too dark to see and i can't tell if i took a wrong turn somewhere or if i accidently got  off the path and headed somewhere else but now I'm scared. But i hear something from a bush i went over to it and a creature jumped out he looked like a pony but he had holes and look like a fly. I then walked over to him and spoke to him "hi I'm lighting rose who are you? He looked at me in an eyeing fashion he then spoke "i have no name but I'm a changeling and you will make a good meal." I then jumped in surprise to what he said "what do you mean a meal I'm not food I'm a pony like you." All of a sudden i found myself to be stuck in a sticky substance it was green and weird felling but the pony in front of me just smirked and came close to me and put his mouth on mine he was kissing me and i didn't know what to do. My vision blurred and it went green i felt like i was floating in space but then i saw the guy i liked he stood over me and helped me up and suddenly he kissed me a i found myself kissing him back he was just in toxicating i could not resist i never wanted to leave this place it felt nice. I looked at the changeling kissing the alicorn and i could not stand by as i saw this i floated down and walked over to them the changeling opened his eyes and broke the kiss off and stepped passed the red and black pony he then smirked and charged me but it was futile as i used my magic he stopped dead in his tracks and i walked up to him and cut him down with my blade and opened time again he fell to the ground bleeding. The pony stood there looking into space and was still smiling i just cut her out of the goo and put her on my back and carried her back to a random cave and i set her down and went to find wood for a fire but before i left she whispered something it was "i love yo..." i knew she wasn't talking about me the changeling must have taken her true loves form and used it on her but i shoved the thought out of mind and went to find wood. The sun light hit my eyes and i woke up sweaty  i looked at my hand and thought what happened but i herd a voice it sounded close in fact in front of me "you're awake good to see your ok from that changeling kiss." I looked up and to my shock it was another pony even better an alicorn like me i then jumped at him and landed on him hard i then started speaking quick but then felt dizzy and seeing the pony i had a crush on again but he disappeared quick and i fell on my rear hard he then stood up and out stretched his hand "are you ok." He asked "yea I'm fine thanks for asking by the way who are you and why am i seeing the pony i have a crush on?" i asked him "my name is time shift a alicorn who controls time and the reason your seeing your true love is because that changeling from last night put a spell over you to eat your love but i stopped him before he had a good night's snack." He smiled at me but i noticed he had been cut and bruised in certain spot's "o my are you ok you look hurt" he then shrugged more of them came last night and attacked us but i held them off wasn't bright of me to make a fire but you would have free zed to death without it so it was a win for me and you. so what's your name?" i felt weird no one asked who my name was and no one cared i then answered immediately "my name is lighting rose" he then smiled "lighting rose a pretty name for a pretty girl" i then stood back "you're not hitting on me are you?" he then laughed at me "no I'm not i already have a love and i don't dare go behind her back i would like to live a lot longer before that happens." He then took his shoulder in his hand and slid down the cave wall in pain. "Are you alright" i said in alarm. He then looked up at me and said "go into my pack there should be bandages in there." I ran over to his pack and opened it to find bandages i rushed over to him and put them on his wounds but he asked me "what are you doing out here anyway ponyville is on the other side of this forest you know that right?" i then turned my head down and started crying "they don't like me there so i live here in another cave but last night i got lost and well you know the rest." I then stood up and walked to the other side of the cave but he stood up and walked over and sat beside me "why are you sitting close to me don't you want to run too just like the rest." He then looked mad "i won't run away from a pony i saved i don't know why you would ask that to me but i won't leave you alone in this condition." He then grabbed my hand and dragged me out of the cave "HEY WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?" he then let go and dropped a knife in front of me "you're goanna help me find the element's of harmony so i won't be alone and nether will you sound nice?" i then started to tear up and said to him "i don't want to be alone take me with you but before we leave one 3 ground rules 1 if you think i'm going to be the damsel in distress and if you say i am one I'm going to kick your ass 2 when i go for a bath you hang out behind something so we can both react to something if we get in trouble but if you peak I'll kill you and final rule if you leave me ill break you in two got it?" he smiled and said "i will gladly accept those requests let's go."
The two set off but the obstacle's ahead of them will test in sanity and secrets will be revealed about the two so stay ready for part 2 every pony
this is a story of my pony oca time shift and katythedogs oca if you dont know who she is here's a link she is funny and awsome [link]
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Artist
lol XD thanks and i do sound tough in this ... i like it!
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
i know i tried to make your character tough and brave but i had to have the element of confusion and fear and also i had to come up with a way for our character's to meet and i remember changelings being flown in different direction's so i thought your character could meet a changeling but i had 3 ideas one where you beat the snot out of him but then i remembered your new to the land so you don't know the place very well the second one was were your character get's knocked out by the changeling and brought before crhysalis but then again i have no clue where she was so i went with the third one where my guy saves you from the control of the changeling so yea im going to ask my friends at school what they think of it and i would really love for you to give some ideas to help me out since this is our story do u think you can help me out with this cause i dont want to write something that you will get mad at me with so yea really glad you liked it and hope we can go one with it.
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Artist
well one idea is that we meet one of the mane six and maybe they help us out with the elements of harmony
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
ok that sounds awesome which one
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Artist
how about twilight
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
sweet i like that idea but we do have to come up with a ecusse about where they are cause they are with celestia and i want it to be a adventure
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KatyTheDog Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Artist
yea i see
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lunakilla98 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
so what do you think we should do with it?
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